

Synopsis
A billionaire who is bored with life has managed to drag me into a life that I never expected to go through. A mafia game begins with me as the main character. The mafia leader makes every effort to claim me as his while seizing control of every aspect of my life.
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"You will become mine someday, cupcake. I am betting my everything on it," he dangerously growled into my ears.
"People lower their guards with the ones they think have control over. I advise you to be careful once that happens, Mr. billionaire. I am not someone you can blindly trust." I replied while staring into his dark eyes fixed on me and only me.
billionaire
possessive
intelligent
powerful
doctor
kidnap
kickass heroine
mxg
fate
older guy
Latest chapter
The beginning
"Why can't we finish a single vacation abroad without having to come back?" I asked Diego while at the airport, I did not ask him to go back home, I wanted to spend more time in Russia but he insisted that I should be surrounded by my own people.
"I know that it is still your fifth week but you need to think more about my baby,"
"Your baby?" I exclaimed as I...
Cute quest
Bella's POV:
Following my plan, I met the guy from yesterday in front of Brian's school. I have to say that his sister was the most beautiful girl I have ever seen, an angel on earth. Her name was Monica, a pretty name that suits her features, I brought her and Brian ice creams and we left them to play with each other. I was being careful as per Diego's advi...
A smile
I headed to the bar to get ourselves some drinks as usual, while waiting for our order to be ready; I was navigating my phone, that is when a cute younger man started a conversation with me, "Hey there, I think I have seen you before,"
"You did? Where?"
"Is the boy sitting there your brother, right?"
"Yes, he is,"
"I guess he attends Mayfair mixe...
New page
It was the first time that I wake up because of a car's sound, it was not any car though, it was Diego's car. I heard the tires rubbing the ground vigorously as he parked his jaguar. I quickly jumped to the bathroom and dolled myself up. Mum came in to wake me up and was surprised to see me wearing a bright sundress and sandals at home. "Don't you think that...
Confession
"I thought that rich people propose by doing the craziest stuff; I never even imagined a regular guy to propose to me on the street while standing, by addressing my little brother with such a serious look," It is not like I love surprises, parties or spending a big amount of money to rent a whole place. On the contrary, I hate this stuff; I hate exaggeration...
Relieved
We hopped in the car again and headed to Diego's mansion where Falcon stayed. We accessed his bedroom; I have to say that it was fun to see his reaction surprised as hell when he saw me coming in. "Diego? What is happening?" Falcon had his phone in his hand and he seemed annoyed, "Where is the kid, dad?"
"What kid?"
"Wasn't it enough that you have manipulate...

Comments
is there a sequel in the works??? wondering about her mom????
2022-02-21 06:10:37
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Hi author. I would like to start off by saying that the storyline of your book is quite interesting. It must be a good book since you already have a lot of readers. (I'm not really sure if it's great compared to others because I'm not a fan of mafia books at all) However, as your reader, I would like to be honest with you. There are a lot of grammatical errors, wrong placement of pronouns, and improper use of punctuations. You may ask a good editor or proofreader to help you out with that. Or use some grammar checking applications online.
Now I'm not judging you as a person but as a writer. And I believe that we all have our opinions so here is mine. I don't have to be your editor or a critic to tell you this but if you really strive to be on top, having the number of reads shouldn't be a basis and never should make you feel that your book is great. Again as I've said, it has an interesting storyline but with regards to technicalities. I wouldn't say it's good.
If you feel offended with this comment I sincerely apologize that you feel that way, but I'm not sorry for telling you all that facts I mentioned a while ago. It truly is hurtful to see someone point out your mistakes, but remember that we should not be hateful of those criticism. I myself was able to receive a lot of those and it became my stepping stone to be better. Have a nice day and I hope to see you become better soon.
2021-10-29 05:19:24
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Gotta say that the main characters are very peculiar, indeed...
2021-08-27 11:53:55
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That was a hell of a twist, nice story author
2021-08-22 16:40:14
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Great story ❤️ the chemistry between the leads is awesome
2021-08-14 00:07:28
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