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A billionaire who is bored with life has managed to drag me into a life that I never expected to go through. A mafia game begins with me as the main character. The mafia leader makes every effort to claim me as his while seizing control of every aspect of my life. ************ "You will become mine someday, cupcake. I am betting my everything on it," he dangerously growled into my ears. "People lower their guards with the ones they think have control over. I advise you to be careful once that happens, Mr. billionaire. I am not someone you can blindly trust." I replied while staring into his dark eyes fixed on me and only me.
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is there a sequel in the works??? wondering about her mom????
2022-02-21 06:10:37 1
Alicia Diana
Hi author. I would like to start off by saying that the storyline of your book is quite interesting. It must be a good book since you already have a lot of readers. (I'm not really sure if it's great compared to others because I'm not a fan of mafia books at all) However, as your reader, I would like to be honest with you. There are a lot of grammatical errors, wrong placement of pronouns, and improper use of punctuations. You may ask a good editor or proofreader to help you out with that. Or use some grammar checking applications online. Now I'm not judging you as a person but as a writer. And I believe that we all have our opinions so here is mine. I don't have to be your editor or a critic to tell you this but if you really strive to be on top, having the number of reads shouldn't be a basis and never should make you feel that your book is great. Again as I've said, it has an interesting storyline but with regards to technicalities. I wouldn't say it's good. If you feel offended with this comment I sincerely apologize that you feel that way, but I'm not sorry for telling you all that facts I mentioned a while ago. It truly is hurtful to see someone point out your mistakes, but remember that we should not be hateful of those criticism. I myself was able to receive a lot of those and it became my stepping stone to be better. Have a nice day and I hope to see you become better soon.
2021-10-29 05:19:24 4
Gotta say that the main characters are very peculiar, indeed...
2021-08-27 11:53:55 6
That was a hell of a twist, nice story author
2021-08-22 16:40:14 9
abdelrahman alex
Great story ❤️ the chemistry between the leads is awesome
2021-08-14 00:07:28 7